A few lines here and a few thoughts there. Some rhyming, some just raw. Over time it evolved into a collection that found appreciation. Work that quite a lot of people could relate to. And now it’s all set to be published in my first book of poetry ‘Poem Person’. Featured here are some definite inclusions so you know just what to expect when you purchase a copy, coming to a bookstore near you…
It's obvious that this review will be longer than the item it is reviewing but still, I liked the way this poem ambushes the moment. It directs the action: come here, sit down, you're it, do me. No waste anywhere in these lines. That's a sign of good poetry. I wanted it to go on and on, but I can see now that there might have been a large gap between the last line and the next.
It's obvious that this review will be longer than the item it is reviewing but still, I liked the way this poem ambushes the moment. It directs the action: come here, sit down, you're it, do me. No waste anywhere in these lines. That's a sign of good poetry. I wanted it to go on and on, but I can see now that there might have been a large gap between the last line and the next.
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